Thursday, May 22, 2008

Casanova Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nautical boundaries of your mind
Elapsed beneath the time frame
Of your wondrous consigns
Noteworthy for applauded brain game
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Gi Galen 25 May 2008

Very tempting … it is beautiful...

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Estrella Baldemosa 25 May 2008

a predator in the wild, looking for its prey...bravo! a woman should write this one.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 24 May 2008

A magnificent poetic delivery...touched my heart and reached my soul...It rained on earth...Bravo! ! ! A '10' A damned lover... Game is over... Have to pull over... Wish u all the best! ! ! Mr. Casanova

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~ Jon London ~ 24 May 2008

Love this my brother, Life in the fast lane my friend.....The imagery is explosive the way you express is of a master poet, 'Genius'........Sulaiman without doubt you are the finest creator of magical places to send your viewers to. *10* Best wishes my brother Jon

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Ian X 24 May 2008

'crime consuming' is genius! The whole of the poem is great, but I love a good phrase like that....

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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2008

I am confused by this one Salaiman. Though the language sounds wonderful, it's meaning is not quite clear to me. You speak of Casanova 'stuttering' - as a snake hovering under the eagle's shadow (great metaphor, by the way) . But later, he 'grabs the dreaming woman.' So your final stanza is puzzling though it is very well crafted. 'Casanova A damned Mr. Lover The game is over You have to pull over'. I'd like to know more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2008

a good consignment from a good brain here…a poem well thought out...

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Lily Law 22 May 2008

Cool poem................. =]

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Mayra Mendivil 22 May 2008

Logical and sincere! love it

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