Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Carved Upon The Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lips sigh life onto humble tongues,
the virtues you regret,
have only lost you.
I touch the poisoned lips of tainted lust,
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Crimson Love
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Eric Cockrell 17 January 2012

powerful, strong imagery! very good!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 January 2012

Wow! Great poem Crim.

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Dave Walker 03 January 2012

Wow, a great poem, really really loved this. The last line is fantastic.

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