Friday, December 5, 2008

Carrying On Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling into this underground cave,
where the dark has no light to crave,
finding a land that has been lost,
with the creatures of a long frost.
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Carissa McBride
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sky dreams 11 September 2009

this poem is captivating.. i really enjoyed reading it, great write!

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Matt Borg 14 February 2009

nice poem well written dude particularly like the last verse

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 December 2008

Carrying on with life that hurts is painful........unbearable pains.Well done Mascara.Nice piece indeed.

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 05 December 2008

WOW! Bleeding Mascara is realy fun to write with, if yal get a chance hook up with her :)

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Carissa McBride

Carissa McBride

Toledo Ohio
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