Thursday, June 28, 2007
Carry On Comments
Rating: ★4.5
I have a dream,
of famous words and free birds,
Sitting under a tree and just being me.
Nobody faces identical hardships
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Scarlett Treat
28 June 2007
The idea behind this poem is great, but I would try and eliminate some of the 'ands' that are in it.. I love that last line - (I would eliminate But) No burden is heavy if everyone lifts. That is wonderful...Scarlett
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