Thursday, February 11, 2016

Carry On Comments

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Pull a rabbit from a worn out hat, a coin from behind an ear
Sorry if I don't applaude at that
But I have spent too many years here
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Edmund Strolis
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Nosheen Irfan 16 February 2016

This poem speaks to the heart. Yes, we must carry on. That's the essence of life, to carry on no matter what. The track will lead to sunlight eventually.

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Edmund Strolis 16 February 2016

Thank you Nosheen, how nice it would be to write of happy endings. Still through hope and strength of will we move forward and persevere.

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Sarah Persson 12 February 2016

Absolutely love this. A few lines thrown together in such a way, its as if the pain and pity were mine. Brilliant. A true artist and a priviledge to read your works.

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