Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Carry Me Home Comments

Rating: 2.8

The journey is over, my work is done,
Gone are the days when I used to run
Searching for everything under the sun.....
I'm ready, please carry me home;
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Mohamed Ali 23 June 2011

This poem is written so beautifully and reveals the image of crossing over. In our modern culture we still are caught up in that belief that dead is something to fear.10+

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Hnt Var 30 March 2010

A beautifull way to express in words..

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 November 2009

Sadness happiness are the devine design......Going home is a good prayer from the poets heart to free the one suffering.Poem is sad.Well written

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 November 2009

Sad indeed! Home is the best place in this mysterious World but one day we have to abandon as per rules?

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David Harris 12 November 2009

Linda, this is a sad poem. I have recently lost a brother-in-law with the same debilitating disease that tears away the mortal fibre of anyone who has it. We can only take heart that they are no longer in pain. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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