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This poem is delightful Andrew, I loved the flow of it as I read it through, and the repeat ending lines. Wonderful write, a pleasure to find this one. Loved it. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

You have shown deep emotion with this poem Andrew. I think it would make a wonderful title for a song, prayer or film. You are reaching out to find the way and in so doing, have found it (I think almost) in the last stanza. It keeps going around in my head, and if a poem does this, it is great work. 10 Karin Anderson

Hi Andrew! ! There's no denying that this poem touches the emotional cord! A superb write and my pleasure to read! ! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad

Sometimes we all get lost and have nowhere to turn, your faith shines through in this charming piece, 10 Lynda xx

Love the repetition of the refrain that concludes each verse and the emotion and musicality of the poem. It reads like the lyrics of a hymn. Finely crafted poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥