Carry Me Away Comments
A fallen twig I am
Who does care.
Walk over me and I'll be buried
And the land be left bare.
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Excellent write: perfect layout, tone, mood, word picture. Thanks for your comments and ratings on my poem called Gideon Valley.
Excellent write: perfect tone, rhythm, mood. Thanks for your comments and ratings
A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
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8/2/2025 11:10:36 PM # 1.0.0
A tad repetitive, but nice poem...