Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Carrots & Sticks Comments

Rating: 4.5

My little square of sky,
With people passing by,
A glimpse into the day,
Distant echoes of play,
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Daniel P Martin
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Shadow Girl 07 September 2011

Like this one; bit of humour, bit of sadness, bit of reflection...good mix -SG

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Hans Vr 05 September 2011

Wow, Daniel a poem with a great rythm and good rhyme. The content is thought provoking. If our lives are chained to a space bar, it is time to find the inner light. I am not sure, but I have read once that whatever job at hand, we can always enjoy it by trying to do it a bit better than the previous day. If what we do, is really not our calling, we should work towards a change of what we do or try to make what we do our calling. Let us try to ignore the carrots and sticks put up by others and create our own (? ?)

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Stefanie Fontker 01 September 2011

Very true, life is filled with good and bad, or carrots and sticks as you have said. Beautiful writing.

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