Friday, April 21, 2006

Carrier Bag In The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.3

I am trapped in the bramble bush,
ripped open by savage thorns,
exposing my dirty innards.
I flap hauntingly in the evening breeze,
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Esther Leclerc 21 April 2006

Whimsical yet plain (a carrier bag!) all at once. You've taught me empathy for a thing! ... Beautifully descriptive; I love it. Esther : ]

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Not Long Left 21 April 2006

agree with Danny and Duncan, this is a well thought out poem it takes a person of great imagination to think of this, it was rather like the Odyssey, only this time the character was a carrier bag! ! ! really know this is a great poem, one of the most imaganative I have read for some time. all the best Vincent

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Duncan Wyllie 21 April 2006

The way that you saw all this was brilliant! You have dug deep and then flown high 10 from me, Love Duncan

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