I am trapped in the bramble bush,
ripped open by savage thorns,
exposing my dirty innards.
I flap hauntingly in the evening breeze,
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agree with Danny and Duncan, this is a well thought out poem it takes a person of great imagination to think of this, it was rather like the Odyssey, only this time the character was a carrier bag! ! ! really know this is a great poem, one of the most imaganative I have read for some time. all the best Vincent
The way that you saw all this was brilliant! You have dug deep and then flown high 10 from me, Love Duncan
Whimsical yet plain (a carrier bag!) all at once. You've taught me empathy for a thing! ... Beautifully descriptive; I love it. Esther : ]