Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, September 18, 2012

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I am carried away by love flood
All of sudden heavy rush of blood
Veins opened up fully to facilitate the flow
I wished her to hold me to save from blow
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Good Barbara Cadogan3 minutes ago Spell check. I think you meant veins instead of ' vanes Comment 1 Comment0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Alastair McGough5 minutes ago don't leave her where she started, torn, lonely and broken heated Comment 0 Very emotional!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Gelene Beverly10 minutes ago I love the writing and meaning within subtle words.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

I am carried away by flood All of sudden heavy rush of blood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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