Saturday, January 14, 2017

Carpet The Ground With Rustle Whispering Warmth Comments

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listen to the fallen leaves wind whisper rustle
warm dry blankets of colour flame leaves rustle
carpet the ground with rustle whispering warmth
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Terence George Craddock
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Cigeng Zhang 26 January 2017

I read the poem as if hearing the whispering wind and rustling leaves... Very soothing and beautiful. Thanks for the nice poem!

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Annette Aitken 18 January 2017

I can see the Autum leaves carpeting all around, splashing splended colour on the ground.

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