Carpet Of Light Comments

loved it, simply loved your capturing of sunlight/darkness, the spreading glow that warns the soul, light enveloping the soul! ! ! Lovely...keep writing...Ruth: -)

Extraordinary is this carpet of light...revelation, AHA moment...you've captured it well!

Light and darkness, two extremes that fascinate. Light often brings security but darkness can bring peace. I can see that your work does reflect this fascination.

The darkness around deepened the glow, ... ...liked your writing....your thought process.....

a fantastic piece of work.

now what is this carpet of light is it knowledge is it faith in god is it love? whatever, it was always there one has to only introspect to be lead towards it a powerful poem seeking introspection -10 anjali

a very beautiful poem with nice imagination

i can see here you are in a meditative state to percieve this carpet of light, beautiful imagery interwoven skillfully. thanks Ranjit Mamta

a poem truly written by an engineer fine write

dats a divine light which brings joy n happiness in the minds if ppl... very well scripted words... fine wrtten.. thanx

it can be light of knowledge... it can be light of a revelation... it can be the light as it originally exists in all of us and which we aren't aware of...

Very well written piece. I am going to probably not get the interpretation correct. I see this piece about destiny. I see it as the hope of things to come. Excellent work.

imaginative...provides a good imagery of the wonder in the sky...refreshing write...10

there is beautiful rhyme and tremendous reason in this poem, thanx

To enlighten the soul...the festive illumination....simple but verstile rendering....enlightening...thank you

very nice creation.......for the carpet of light....................