Sunday, May 20, 2012

Carpenter Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hugging her knees
Sat on the floor
A melancholic smile
She wore
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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A very beautiful poem with rare blends of diction, lyrical charm and what not..

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

very nice words depicted here

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Tsira Gogeshvili 06 July 2012

Just keep open The hope and faith's door .......................................................... Hi, nice words, Amir, best wishes, Ts.

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Mehraneh Hosseini 26 June 2012

Awesome, I read some of your poems, they are full of sense. I Love them. I'm speachless...very good :)

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 17 June 2012

sadness in poems is sadness in life... it`s an awful way... i know... during last three months i was in depression, i felt myself dead and lost reasons to live. but today i rise for myself, for my angels and people need and love me... be open... and meet sadness just in poems :)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 June 2012

Just keep open The hope and faith's door.... Seeing into within Haste swoons to wrest Wishes defrayed Ebb awaits to shore...wonderful write by imagery and metaphor,

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Kasia Fedyk 05 June 2012

So beautiful, I can feel the whole poem moving through me. Thank you!

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Reihaneh Jalalian 22 May 2012

that gave me a great feeling after not being here for such a long time awesome job rrrrrrreally interesting to me thanQ

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