Monday, July 8, 2013

Carpe Diem Comments

Rating: 2.8

The cool breeze of the dawn
with the slim sunlight,
Followed by the glaring sunshine
the chirping of birds, the song of cuckoo,
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Kavya .
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Lee Mack 16 November 2016

GRACE...........................

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Yasmin Khan 05 October 2013

Each day offers us new promises and new dreams so Horace said rightly 'fugerit invida aetas: carpe diem, ''. You've captured the theme nicely.

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 July 2013

Submerge in this dream land...yes a beautiful dream land..Lovely write. and enjoyed reading it one by one....Very well done.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 14 July 2013

Written with a lovely sense of Carpe-diem- enjoying the present in its entirety! Soothing to the heart, Kavya, dear!

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C. P. Sharma 11 July 2013

Awesome moods corroborated with Nature. A lovely poem woven with happiness.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 July 2013

A simple joyous verse. Reflects the tender and dreamy nature of the poetess, together with aesthetic heart.

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Valsa George 08 July 2013

How we all long for such a lovely day! Kavya, You have succeeded in painting the beauty of a glorious day in its entirity! Enjoyed this lovely write..... Oh! ... Carpe Diem!

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Dinesan Madathil 08 July 2013

So altogether the entire day is very beautiful as the beauty lies in the eyes of the onlooker... A good write...

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