The cool breeze of the dawn
with the slim sunlight,
Followed by the glaring sunshine
the chirping of birds, the song of cuckoo,
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Each day offers us new promises and new dreams so Horace said rightly 'fugerit invida aetas: carpe diem, ''. You've captured the theme nicely.
Submerge in this dream land...yes a beautiful dream land..Lovely write. and enjoyed reading it one by one....Very well done.
Written with a lovely sense of Carpe-diem- enjoying the present in its entirety! Soothing to the heart, Kavya, dear!
Awesome moods corroborated with Nature. A lovely poem woven with happiness.
A simple joyous verse. Reflects the tender and dreamy nature of the poetess, together with aesthetic heart.
How we all long for such a lovely day! Kavya, You have succeeded in painting the beauty of a glorious day in its entirity! Enjoyed this lovely write..... Oh! ... Carpe Diem!
So altogether the entire day is very beautiful as the beauty lies in the eyes of the onlooker... A good write...
GRACE...........................