Friday, December 7, 2007

Carpe Diem Comments

Rating: 2.6

the shadow of today
clouds our minds
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Scarlet .....
COMMENTS
Dislocated Heart 27 November 2008

I like it, very nice. well-writen.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 27 December 2007

Brillient poem! And ur right everyday is different and has a different pain to it... Great work: -)

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Uloia Norris Moore 10 December 2007

Minds are always clouded by shades of grey be it tomorrow's hope or the passing of yesterday forgotten nought day's pain or happy know there measure for today is the test renewed. Good job.

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Fred Babbin 07 December 2007

I guess part of the pain here is having to scroll down to get the final juice. - THe King of Pain

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Wandering Scarlet 07 December 2007

way sikk poem i enjoyed it a lot, keep writing

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