Tuesday, May 22, 2018

Carousel To Hell Comments

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Enter, and surrender your soul,
To heartbreak's hell, our realm's control.
Amidst the fire, dwell and rebel,
Where goodness fades, and darkness swells.
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Bri Edwards 15 April 2019

" As you lay in this ungodly inferno" my English teacher(s) would probably say; " it, Bri, don't use " lay" here. Use " lie" ! ! but maybe " lay" comes into play in........your dungeon! to MyPoemList bri :)

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April Humason

April Humason

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