Carousel (Revised) Comments

I chose this title as I loved the musical movie Carousel. You have painted some beautiful pictures with your words and have started the poem wonderfully. Descriptive and creative writing. 10 Karin Anderson

YOUR POEMS ARE ALWAYS FULL OF IDEAS AND THIS IS NOT DIFFERENT PRAGMATIC AND LOVELY. SAQIB

I agree with everyone. There's nothing more that I can say but 10! keep writing...... Jake

Wonderful memories re-created and vividly recalled..Enjoed this one, smiles all the way. Sid.

What a magical memory you have shared, Pablo! ! ! And the poem, so prettily written too - its lyrical pace mimicking the sound of the Wurlitzer and the rising and falling of the brightly painted horses. Your first two lines in particular are a delight. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I can remember those days with my children.

Now this shows all of us what great poetry is made of! I couldn't stop reading this poem. Must have read it four times. Each time it gave me but a deeper journey traveled. God Bless, Ten does not do your work justice so I didn't vote. Linda

bravo, bravo...very beautiful and strong write sir....it sure is a very vivid write indeed but your first stanza continued with the whole poem make me to understand differently........ ' Pondering horses on circular courses A purpose with nowhere to go Their manes set flailing, faces detailing Refusing to heed to the whoa'....it sounds like us or i might be wrong.....thanks many many 100'ssssss rgds asif

Very engaging piece, strong words revealing many unspoken things. You write well Pablo.10

A spectacular landscape of memories painted in very rich colors.10 Best wishes. A.

piece that brings us back our wonderful childhood memories... very wonderfully illustrated... words are really thoughts' enhancing... i can picture out the colorful carousel as i read along your lines... 10 for this

wowwwww i always loved to sit on that as a child at the fairs in Bandra in Mumbai nostalgic memories ---nice write dear Pablo surely 10+++ anjali (do read mine THE WINE OF HEALTH)

Rhymes add music to the form. Very nostalgic. One can only memorize the mood to make it last. Lovely, Pablo. Warm regards, Sandra