Carousel Of Tears Comments

A poem very much expressive and touching...the feelings flow smooth and in whispering silence....10

A vivid depiction of memories endearingly poignant..and ever present....Virtually flawless in structure/metre...this work flows like running water! Excellent work here, Bonnie. F j R

A very touching and vivid poem, thank you.

Bonnie, You are poetess to be reckoned with - your use of metaphors makes this poem for sure... extraordinarily penned! Best regards to you, Robert

A beautiful poem indeed. Very good piece.

I gave this a 10 because of the creativity of your presentation. How wonderful! GW62

Wonderfully written and enjoyable to read...Hugs

This is wonderful Bonnie. I really like how you have kept the fairground theme running through the work. Top marks. Andrew x

Your theme of disappointment is perfectly encapsulated by your choice of a carnival theme with it's glitsy 'theatrical' mask and it's underlying sweat and angst. So often it is the comic who suffers from depression. Great piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

dear Bonnie, I read through this poem of yours with gathering sadness, loss is such a fact of life, somehow I sat with you as you penned it and felt what you felt- what more can we ask of a poem? ? well done KS