Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Carom Comments

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Heavy my new carom-board is -
Like Antony when Cleopatra lifts him -
But moved out of store-room, and set up for me
To practise, improve my skill so I can later play
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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph
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Lawrence Beck 11 November 2008

Very nice. Regardless of your carom score, you have won the game you are playing now, writing a thoughtful, interesting poem. Larry

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Daniel Trevelyn Joseph

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