Monday, March 19, 2012

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Sitting here thinking of you leaving me breathless, My heart was once cold and never seemed to beat, Your kiss is electric kicking my heart as it beats to the feeling of your skin.

Your eyes are the color of the sky when it turns blue, Your voice can sooth my soul and calm the ocean in my head, When I stand by you I feel I can do anything through you, When you say you love me it makes my head turn and my body feel numb, I will stay as you are the one who has stolen me away.
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Anne Yun 09 March 2016

Hi Connr Could i match the image in your words to the real you? I hope not, because these strong feelings can push us into deeper trap. I'd like to see a more quiet you with less blue.

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Mandi June 01 January 2013

Honest and heartfelt words of true love! This is what poetry and writing expression is all about, Connor... Wonderful job!

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Makayla Straight 19 December 2012

I once felt like this, now I just feel like Im heartless

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Samantha Rak 14 November 2012

Connor, as I think I have said many times: you are an AMAZING writer. When you told me about this I had to look it up and I'm completely speechless. You took my breath away yet again. I swear I might cry if you stopped writing so don't stop writing! ! ! Stay strong, stay focused, stay YOU! Cheers :)

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Carolina Soto 01 May 2012

Your love for her is soooo beautiful! ! ! ! 1

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Aria Quimby 25 March 2012

aww how cute! ! nice!

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Jessie Jett 23 March 2012

Wow, you paint a wonderful picture, the words of love and you can read it in your passages. Another good one. :)

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