Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Carnival Minds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Theyre sending letters to the fallen king
He cant read but he can sing
Like a blind man that knows where he is
Or a virgin that has 3 kids
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Robbie Squires
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fine poem. written well. ill tell you what was told to me. when you rhyme.. make it a proper rhyme, gives it that special height.

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Robbie Squires

Robbie Squires

Akron, Ohio
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