Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Carnival Comments

Rating: 5.0

The half moon begins its harvest climb;
This night is sure to be as bright as day.
The turf fires kindle and flame into life
In the hillside homes this evening time.
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Matt Mooney
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Bert Bell 15 November 2010

This is a beauty, Matt. So rich in texture and fine images. Splendid.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

Metaphor festivity galore…into the ‘Into’ of Carnival [noetic] …thanks Sir… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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John Oconnell 14 May 2010

This one warms the cockles of the heart. Further comment would spoil its perfection. Thanks! John

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Patti Masterman 05 August 2009

I love the language in here, I can hear the carnival and see the lights. Reminds me of Balboa in California. I've only been there twice; but there is a little ferris wheel all lit up at night, beside the ocean; it has a surreal feeling to it. Sort of little and homey and spacious all at the same time.

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Matt Mooney

Matt Mooney

South Galway, Ireland.
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