Sunday, November 4, 2007

Carnal Dreams Comments

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Embraced in these carnal dreams, we indulge,
instantly we become rather alert.
So alive in this world of deep tantra,
yet, we find ourselves wanting to believe.
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Alison Cassidy 14 November 2007

The repetition of the end line words gives authority to this fascinating poem about love and tantric desire. I read it first without recognizing its sestina form and then a couple more times watching the pattern drive its creative engine. You have inspired me Kristin. I might even have a go myself. Great poem. Great subject. Skillful use of the Sestina form. love, Allie xxxx

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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