Monday, August 25, 2008

Carnal Comfortability. Comments

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That stillness of air between the centimeter gaps which separates us
That same rhythm of exhalations, we're counting each opposing movement
Looking at your steady chest, stealing glances at my watch and
we're both rearranging the way our pants fit so tightly.
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Kim Dang
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Chuck Sanford 25 August 2008

Kim, I really like some of the lines of your poem. You have lines that are really deep, and then others that are embarrassing.

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Kim Dang

Kim Dang

United States
Kim Dang
Kim Dang
United States
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