Tuesday, July 6, 2010

Carmen Comments

Rating: 0.0

I fall in unfair love
My lover is kind and tough
Faces of him wanna appear
That's cause my fear
...
Read full text

COMMENTS

Interesting read, unfair love...has no balance! Well done! ; D

0 0 Reply
Marieta Maglas 09 July 2010

lyric lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem....

0 0 Reply
rebo bebo

rebo bebo

alexandria, egypt
Close
Error Success