Thursday, March 2, 2006

Carmen-06 Comments

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carmen was her name
partying was her game
she loved to get drunk
and eddie was her hunk
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Red Blooded Black Hearted 06 November 2007

I'm sorry to hear it happened... I like the poem though, like Rocco Scocco said. It had great rhyming.

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Wandering Scarlet 03 August 2007

sad, although i like your rhymes well done

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Lylyanna Pilewski 09 October 2006

awww that's really sad. great poem though. Lylyanna

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