Carmella Comments

this poem has created a new theme to my day. i feel you emotions.

i can feel your emotion from the poem...10+

Well done feel about this poem love leaves its mark ++++10 regards

Poem comes across with a special type of love feeling.

i dont know what to say because what ever i wrote or even they wrote is not enough at all well done and thanks for sharing 10******** is a little expression laila lili

Liked the feel you gave this of greed verses happiness. Your memories linger on and your words created lovely images. 10 Karin Anderson

Great poem of honest love and being sure or convinced that she is much too good for ye. I gave it a ten for it's humbling imagery. God bless us all-MJG.

yes dear Lee, its really hard work an wonderfull poem, well done

hilltops to board rooms, juxtaposition of love and buisness deals- very thoughtful write. last lines are really wonderful. 10 Mamta

beautiful and touching it flows smoothly and flows with tranquility.. i love the thoughts..the picture it painted the memories it share... lovely 10+++++ lovelots, maia

Good flow Well crafted top marks

this is a nice work..a beautiful piece..since you exert an effort in making this so,10 for you dear..naizz

I agree with the other readers, This piece is a very fine free verse sculpture. Well done!

What an awesome poem! I loved it! Ten

A well carved sculpture......... conveyiing my sincere thanks for your kind sharing.....see 10++

A well carved sculpture......... conveyiing my sincere thanks for your kind sharing.....see 10++

I like the feeling of freedom the poems characters seem to share. I like the sense of a certain knowing, of a secret that's remained hidden for years.

this is a nice write. Thanks for this

You said you worked hard on this...yes; it shows...juat like a sculptor would have, you have worked on this piece Lee...you have chiselled out a beautiful poem there...enchanting imageries...thanks...10

beautiful............