Carmel Poem by Shaun Cronick

Carmel

Rating: 5.0


Carmel, drop a dream into the water,
In a moment it is gone.
But there are many ripples,
Circling on and on....

When facing life's many worries,
All storms you will pass through.
You will garnish many strengths,
And new found courage too.

You have often felt trapped,
And so dreamed of being free.
You will fulfil your potential,
And become who you want to be.

For no goal worth attaining,
Is ever easy to achieve.
It takes work and dedication,
And the power to believe.

Believe in yourself Carmel.
Simply believe.

Tuesday, September 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,dreams,hope,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For Carmel.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 September 2019

A very inspiring poem so beautifully written. A great dedication to Carmel. This marvelous write will surely motivates Carmel to propel to greater heights.

6 0 Reply
Shaun Cronick 12 September 2019

Rose Marie this is actually Inspire Me written for a good person where I work for her friend Carmel. who needs a bit of luck at this time, something to lift her spirits. And I agree with your splendid comments. Thank you so much Rose Marie. Take care and enjoy life.

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success