Monday, November 16, 2009

Caribbean Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sultry Caribbean breeze,
Tickles our eyelids neath the parasol
Offered by gently swaying palms.
Soft hisses where the turquoise ocean
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Nancy Crossman
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Wow! You just describe the place where I live. Wonderfully written! Which island did you visit and when are you coming back? Well done my friend.10/10 for your poem and 10/10 for the Caribbean.

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