Caressing The Earth Comments

Very good poem

Very beautiful, sort of pantheistic view on life and earth.

Yes, Mother Earth (like any other mother on earth) cares for us and caresses us with her several arms like the Air etc. Maternal love is seldom found wanting but it is filial love that often falters. Your poem reminds us that we should also prove ourselves worthy of the love of Mother Earth. Since we are all the children of the same Mother Earth, we should stop bickerig and turn our attention to serving her in the best possible manner with our hands locked in fraternal friendship. A fine piece of poem.

Short, sweet and very awesome

What a lovely poem! I really like this one. This is a theme I've ascribed myself to likewise.

I like the ways you use the metaphors of moon, night, sun, light, air, sea, earth. The repetition is effective: “...is my...” with the breaks of “The air....” and “To blossom...” Worth reading again and again.

Every poem of beauty is not a long one and this one is definitely beautiful. Be Well

I like your poem. It reads with a pleasant rhythm and the message is nice to savor. You use picturesque metaphors.

This is beautiful! It's concise and rich in imagery.

This is such a lovely poem with a rhythm that I feel like wanting to dance to it! Well done!

That is the word for this poem... graceful. I like it too.

Well done Suzan, This graceful poems conveys a mood reminiscent of Emily Dickinson. Robert

A little T & S, here, Suzan....Tranquility & Serenity....a skilled penning, indeed '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

Some lovely images here Suzan. Like how the pace slows down after 'caresses me' - it's as if the read has taken that breath of air with you. Kind regards, Justine.

beautiful poem with nice imagery.....

The sea is my flow And the earth is where I grow To blossom and explore Tis the life I'd like to adore Into a world' the true innocence in a love that may a 'usurp '- that is my wish to be here And the earth is where I grow To blossom and explore nicely you made this wish of us