Caress Undercover- Haiku Comments

I remember the ashen look on your face when tinywords didn't publish it

What Linda says is absolutely right. there is an innocent sensuality in this perfect piece. F

lol! ! ! ...i had no idea what i had wrtten was profound enuf to evince such a soul wrenching response! ..at the risk of self-depreciation i would like to say..that poem was smply inspired by a frends callous proclamaton that im wicked...its an explanation of why, and on what terms i can accept that sort of criticism.

pretty. appreciate your feedback. ..could you perhaps explain to me what you meant by your comments about'wicked'

isn't that a very sensuous visual!

Sweet and succinct... your eyes may see the beauty, but it's your heart that pens the glory. I love the innocent sensuality of Caress Undercover.