Thursday, February 7, 2008

Careless Whispers Comments

Rating: 4.5

All the careless whispers, and all the faded dreams.
All the broken promises, and all the loosened seams.
In the fallen memory, of a hollow scream.
In the darkness of a heart, so weary of it's skeems.
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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

ichi ban.. very nice poem. reaching out. arigato kudaims.md

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Bill Smith 10 February 2008

they say grab em' with the first line, this worked for me, good work smiffy

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Original Unknown Girl 08 February 2008

Beautiful imagery in this one, great use of words that brought this poem to life. HG: -) xx

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piercing halo 07 February 2008

i really liked this poem i can tell it comes straight from the heart well done!

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