Tuesday, June 30, 2020

Careless Whisperer Comments

Rating: 4.7

Dear careless whisperer,
Some sharings are dagger-edged
and there is no escape when they're turned on you
no countermagic for the soul crushing embarrassment
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anais vionet
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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

Holy cow! ! ! ! Look at the breadth of definitions for 'hussy': 'A woman considered to be brazen or promiscuous. A saucy or impudent girl or young woman. The mistress of the house: same as housewife.' five stars *****

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

I most-enjoyed these words: '..the soul crushing embarrassment dropped as if from a great height.' BOOM! ! ! ! Embarrassed? YOU? Well, put some panties on, you hussy! ! !

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

I heard no 'gun-shot thunderclap of confidence leaving the room', anais. Do you EVER lose your confidence? I don't think that I do, though my wife may lose hers in/about ME! ! ! : )

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

Gee, I guess I commented a year ago as well. Well, well, well! : )

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

(cont.) '...The term is used to reclaim the word and empower women and girls to have agency over their own sexuality. Gender-based violence can be a result of -shaming primarily affecting women. Wikipedia'

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

SLUT-SHAMING: 'Slut-shaming is the practice of criticizing people, especially women and girls, who are perceived to violate expectations of behavior and appearance regarding issues related to sexuality. (cont.)

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Denis Mair 17 July 2023

I like the sudden declivities of your neural riverbed...the swoops and loops of your personal roller-coaster...your kaleidoscopic and richly emotional self-narrative, which you are able to mine for zingy phraseology.

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anais vionet 21 October 2023

what a wonderful comment =]

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2022

anais, your reply to Ron may have upset his nervous system. He ain't young, ya know? I found your comment very funny, ...though I did not laugh.

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2022

I'd pay ten USD to know the WHOLE STORY. bri : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 December 2020

Loved this poem. The world is so treacherous, life so unpredictable. One may stop to think whether Sun would rise tomorrow!

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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2020

Really a concise and insightful piece on backstabbing, well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Chinedu Dike 04 August 2020

The ugly fallout of gossip and backbiting is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Lure Pot 11 July 2020

Wonderful expressed, Anais. I liked this poem. Stay safe!

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Michael R. Burch 10 July 2020

Bravo! It's hard to believe you're only sixteen!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2020

Dear careless whisperer, Some sharings are dagger-edged and there is no escape when they're turned on you no countermagic for the soul crushing embarrassment What wonderful expressions are you writing dear poetess at your young age. you have great talent. thank you. tony

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Careless whispers can be deadly. I really like this poem. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago! Did that happen to you when you started?

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anais vionet 15 April 2022

No, or I just don't remember it happening. Maybe it was SO traumatic I've blocked it… dang, this sounds like something that could take YEARS of therapy.

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Kostas Lagos 30 June 2020

" Some sharings are dagger-edged" ...exceptional poem! 10!

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