Monday, August 19, 2013

Careful Approach Comments

Rating: 4.8

My guard has been restored
invisible shield set in place

For hearts sake:
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Heather Burns
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Laughing@ You 22 November 2013

I appreciate the hope in this poem; the caution is intelligent; the words are powerful.

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 August 2013

Oh! Lord your ways are different Your mercy keeps us different Let all broken hearts mend With your invisible touch.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 August 2013

Let the soft steps be firm. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

only a soft step can mend a broken heart. a beautiful n brilliant write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

Beautiful poem..I approach the future with soft steps....Loved reading it.

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Dave Walker 19 August 2013

We can all be guilty of letting our guard down too soon, a great poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 August 2013

Approach carefully Heather well write nice one

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Pamela Tennant 19 August 2013

A poem worthy to be read, beautiful and profound as always. Brava dear Heather Burns. (Had to log in to post LOL) [3

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