Thursday, January 2, 2020

Carefree Night To Day Comments

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The year comes to enjoy newly
The cheerful night passes cranky
We resolute good
But life forges truth
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Mj Lemon 06 January 2020

A terrific view of the coming of a new year, a new time. I am actually amazing at how much anxiety is masked by the celebrations that take place on a 31st. An excellent verse.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2020

Carefree! ! But, let us watch the sky and, Seek the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Carl Roussell 03 January 2020

This reminds me of many New Years! Good write!

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