Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Carefree Days Comments

Rating: 4.8

The seeds of love was already sown and slowly began to grow
We had to learn from each other is how we stayed in the know
Brothers and sisters were we, a special gift to one another
Growing up together as children with a loving father and mother
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 18 October 2013

Beautiful elaboration of pleasant childhood memory. I believe that is the best period of a painful human life.

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Nader Baheri 05 October 2013

this is very impressing.i love how the poem flows in very nice lines.~nb

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Danny Draper 04 October 2013

Great childhood memories shared in this write and celebration of parents. Sage advice regarding enjoying our childhoods although we never can appreciate that when young.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 September 2013

I think childhood is the most memorable period that sting to thought and mind and the next period is adolescent which has both good and bad feeling childhood is as clear as mirror nice poem Patricia 10

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Neela Nath Das 30 September 2013

I love to remember my childhood days.Still, it shines brightly.

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Abhishek Mishra 29 September 2013

Childhood is the best part of one's life...wonderful poem, it deserves a 10/10... And thank you very much for your kind comments, they meant alot for a aspiring poet: -)

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Noreen Carden 29 September 2013

Hello Patrica memories of childhood thank you for this poem it brought me many lovely memories i feel sorry that many children nowadays dont get to experience the carefree days they grow up too quickly

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Valsa George 29 September 2013

An excursion back to childhood days is so gratifying and rejuvenating! I wonder children of the present can ever tell of any pastimes like climbing trees, playing hide and seek or lying over grass with face up! These are all enjoyments, young ones of a particular time had, irrespective of geograpical and cultural differences! Enjoyed this sweet write, Pat!

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Louis Rams 28 September 2013

electronics have taken over our children s beautiful minds, they won't know what it was to live in our time playing in piles of leaves in the fall and in the winter making igloos in the snow and staying at home just playing tic tac toe

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 September 2013

Wonderful are those childhood days. We never forget them. Older we get more precious they become. Way of life is we can't wait to get older when we are children. Beautiful poem Patricia. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 September 2013

seeds of love, good write, I like it. thanks.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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