Monday, July 21, 2008

Care Comments

Rating: 4.6

I'm there for her,
I care for her.
Oh, does she know?
Does she care?
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Shawn Johnson
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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

A very nice poem, I enjoyed it and added my 10 to it.

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Hannah Martin 01 September 2008

That is so nice! Carefully written and throughly thought out. You should keep writing and you poems will have more poeple apreciating your poems! ~Martin

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

This is a very focused writing. There is a natural repetition that should stick in the mind of the reader. I gave this poem my recommendation vote of 8. GW62

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C T Heart 21 July 2008

Caring heart needs a river of love...........floods to you gushing to your soul! ! ! Heart

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Very sweet... i like the ending.... ...millie...

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Shawn Johnson

Shawn Johnson

Springfield, OHIO
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