Wednesday, September 17, 2008

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Valentine hearts
Are easy to draw,
(Easy to break,)
And easy to throw away.
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Heidi K. Haskell
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Barbara Terry 17 September 2008

we write our pieces for many reasons Heidi. We write from our experiences in life whether they are bad or good, and we write from our imaginations too. I wrote a very short poem about a hummingbird I saw the other day. We want people to understand, be educated, and entertained. We want people to give us good reviews for our work, but we can't please everyone. You have written a wonderful poem describing the heart. I have heart problems, and I ca actually say it is my fault, because only my uncle had heart problems, and we both could have prevented them. But we never listen until it is too late tho. Thank you for sharing this image rich, and passionate write. Hugs, Barbara

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