Cardinal Sin Comments

Very interesting piece.

As they say, forbidden fruit tastes better.....and you've tried a luscious one...! Cheers. Subroto

Superb write, Tracy...sensual and sentimental apparent, your poem bears a truth inside, most of us do not want to admit open...the concluding stanza lines read exceptionally good...10

interesting composition in terms of love.........10

I specialy liked this part 'In reality, I am not yours but in my dreams we embrace'....soo well expressed..happens to me too..some say personal experience dont have a universal value...I should say it has...cause thhings we write can happen to anyone..so well expressed indeed..enjoyed it very much..I m gona read it again..regards shan

This is a most excellently written and expressed poem, Tracy, though I do not agree that to love in dreams is a cardinal sin, especially for those whose love has been repressed for a long, long time by someone who should have appreciated it when it was his to have. Your phrasing in this beautiful and touching poem is quite exquisite! Carl.

A superb detailed written piece of work....well expressed Tracy Thanks for sharing your thoughts....10++ Sue