Cardboard City. Comments

Souls in torment. Thanks for sharing.

This reminds me very much of one of my poems titled, 'Could Be'... particulary the last line. Absolutely a flawless write, Graham... great poem! ! Brian

Wow! This is one of the best poems I've ever read! I especially love the title in connection with the very complex and meaningful subject matter. Very well-crafted, superb imagery. It has emotional depth.

Graham I often write about the homeless/ 0h what sadness, when the world has so much to offer, a poem written with so much feeling.Just wonderful cheers Sylvie

Yep! Another great write from your pen Graham. This is very moving and a dramatic tale, so true, that it makes it scary! Love Ernestine XXX

Excellent images, with such depth and feeling! Well done.

Graham, This is beautifully written and with such description, love and understanding! Well done! Love Debs x