Sunday, August 24, 2008

Card Game Comments

Rating: 4.5

Life is like a game of cards,
You play them right or wrong.
You either feel like you're in the right place,
Or feel like you don't belong.
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Zoe Howarth
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Ellie Sutton 30 August 2008

this is really powerful, keep writing! x

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Emily Oldham 28 August 2008

I agree with you. You put it better than I could. Athena :)

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Janice Windle 24 August 2008

Another lovely expression of feeling, Zoe. You tell it the way it is for all of us. Your rhymes are delightful, never forced, absolutely natural. You have talent. Keep writing. Love, Jan

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