Sunday, April 6, 2008

Carcinoma Comments

Rating: 2.8

My hand stretches out

Unbiddingly -
Involuntarily
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Usha Pisharody
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Marvin Brato 20 May 2008

Smokers should post this poem on their walls to warn them of CARCINOMA! High marks.

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Rema Prasanna 18 May 2008

This one touched my heart, truth is picturasied in realistic words, a hobby to habit to addiction and offer life at the cost price, a message to all those cross lines, great poem

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Flora Gillingham 07 April 2008

Love your poem, Usha. Wonderful (if resigned) ending. You've captured the predicament as effectively as the toxic tobacco has captured you! F

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Prasanna Kumari 06 April 2008

the plight and mental torture of a smoker brought out very well....

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Mark Nwagwu 06 April 2008

carcinoma did you say? and strill i do it/dear God -/still i do it. Plese try, don't do it. carcinoma is serious business. a poem about the darkness of smoke

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