My hand stretches out
Unbiddingly -
Involuntarily
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This one touched my heart, truth is picturasied in realistic words, a hobby to habit to addiction and offer life at the cost price, a message to all those cross lines, great poem
Love your poem, Usha. Wonderful (if resigned) ending. You've captured the predicament as effectively as the toxic tobacco has captured you! F
the plight and mental torture of a smoker brought out very well....
carcinoma did you say? and strill i do it/dear God -/still i do it. Plese try, don't do it. carcinoma is serious business. a poem about the darkness of smoke
Smokers should post this poem on their walls to warn them of CARCINOMA! High marks.