Friday, May 17, 2013

Caravans Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

The caravans have travelled afar
leaving behind dust of times
the tinkle of bells in camels’ necks
have died out leaving echoes
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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

the caravan keeps traveling on into the future. leaving behind thoughts and memories. nice poem

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Kanav Justa 17 May 2013

excellent imagery, , , , specially in the starting of the poem, , , ,

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Saadat Tahir 17 May 2013

wordy and a bit convoluted but that does not detract from the beauty of the poem....it is mostly a misty rendering of nostalgia as if i want people to read, i don't want them to know.... a difficult and laborious self imposed restriction... from which the the poets pen plays peek a boo loved it.... :)

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Yasmin Khan

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