Caravan......................... Comments

Another beautiful, creative poem, Now u have become my favorite poet. Flow of words are fantastic with last line icing on the cake..... Caravan guzar gaya...Caravan past by....

You cover your face from munificent shines these tiny footsteps will never take you forward to reach destine - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Perhaps with time you shall know life is getting past like scenes from running train's window.- - - -Wow such a beautiful poem! Life speeds past toward the Ultimate and why not seize the moments that come our way! ! !

life is getting past like scenes from running train’s window - a line full with fantasy and reality at the same time.. beautiful.

life is getting fast, beautiful, thanks.

Nice piece of work! Thanks.