Sunday, July 22, 2007

Car Washers (Fun Poem 34) Comments

Rating: 5.0

You pull into a car park
and they spring out of nowhere.
“Do you want your car washed
while you’re doing your shopping?
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 27 July 2007

I have that same little red car parked in my driveway...PT Crusier...It used to be mine and I took the best care of it...Then himself took it over....spilt coffee...food...dog nose prints...cigerette ashes...I gave up on cleaning others messes...so it no longer even looks red....cute write: O)

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Thufail Ahmed 25 July 2007

David, you really do have some tricks up your sleeve. A true magician with no dearth of tricks.

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Patricia Gale 22 July 2007

Clever! I did enjoy this delightful piece

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 July 2007

Well thats one way to get rid of them, i use the Northern charm on them.. Touch my car and i will break your arms.. Just joking my friend..10

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Bradfield, England
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