Tuesday, October 27, 2020

Car Troubles... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm just sitting here like a lemon,
Waiting for the phone to ring.
And when it finally decides to,
Will I hear an unwelcome sting.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 November 2020

A poem that cuts like the blade of a sharp knife. So incisive. So true and this resonates to a lot of people. Cleverly written. Top Marks! ! !

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Dominic Windram 30 October 2020

Yes I know that feeling Shaun, if you recall my troubles during the summer. Car troubles can be so FRUSTRATING! ! ! I think your poem is very incisive and perfectly summed up in the last line...so true. It's a deeply frustrating five from me.

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