Captured In His Fairy Tale Comments

I didnt know you could be sweet like this...wow

this was very beautiful and infused with those mushy feelings of love that i am waiting to feel again. however i would like to hear u recite this because i lost the rhythm at the end of the middle of the poem. but i think it may have been the way i was reading. it just seemed different in the first couple of stanzas. but great poem. it makes me want to be in love again really soon. and the ending was superb

This was is very beautiful, very well written, you have a fantastic talent.

aww. i love it. its excellent. just goes to show that love has no age limit. very well done.