Monday, May 5, 2008

Captured In A Tide Of Thought Comments

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I gasp for breath as I break the surface
Of the raging storm-churned waters.
I feel the waves crash upon my face
As I fight to stay afloat.
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Anne Rhitak
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Aden orie 12 October 2008

awesome words, pretty deep to, but wut did u mean by 'rushing air upon my face'?

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Anne Rhitak

Topeka, Kansas
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