(captured Heart) Comments

loved this one............well done! !

yah! every now and then.... our heart still experience.....the tremendous... feeling that we attribute it to our heart.... but the truth is that it is a real feeling of the mind that tells that our being is capture what the heart felt... your as real poet my friend... its realy good poem... thank you...10/10

Great poem and mixture of sublime thoughts. Merry x mas and best wishes, melvin

A clever mixing of formal, nerdy words and the music of emotions. Great poem. H

Marvin, boy do you have that all correct! Loved this! Best, Theo